Wednesday, September 1, 2010

PURSUIT OF FREEDOM.......

Darkness creeping in My Life,
Engulfing My Soul with its figure-less hands.....

I'm NOT the most HONEST,
I WON'T say I HAVE NEVER LIED.......

But,
DON'T FORCE ME doing things,
I DETEST, I LOATHE,
I won't be able to do them,
I WOULD NEVER!!!

It suffocates me,
Its KILLING my Conscience,
Its SOUL-ERODING.......

I'm NOT IMPRISON,
Yet I'm NOT FREE......

Saw My SHADOW in this darkness,
Someone said,
#"Never FEAR SHADOWS.
They simply means there's
a LIGHT SHINING
SOMEWHERE NEARBY"

Captured in this net,
I'll NEVER FALL APART!!!

Light of HOPE,
SPARK of Faith,
I'll COMBAT,
I'll STRIVE,
I'll BLOW AWAY THE DARKNESS,

& Let the LIGHT of FREEDOM SHINE in MY LIFE.......

#QUOTE BY RUTH RENKEL
18 comments on "PURSUIT OF FREEDOM......."
  1. Saw My SHADOW in this darkness,
    Someone said,
    "Never FEAR SHADOWS.
    They simply means there's
    a LIGHT SHINING
    SOMEWHERE NEARBY

    Beautiful Lines ... What I can read in your post is the mode of survival ... for surviving we had to mold ourselves and become someone we loathe... But with time that turns into manipulation and you just manipulate yourself and your words according to the situation once this frustration and suffocation ends ... and manipulation starts it gets easier to handle .. :)... Been There ... Done that..

    Cheers
    Ritz..
    www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com

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  2. a wonderful positive affirmation being in a imposed darkness...
    apt usage of simple words :)

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  3. "They say, that I must learn to kill before I can feel safe,
    But I, I'd rather kill myself than turn into their say.

    Sometimes, I feel like going down and so disconnected,
    somehow, I know that I am haunted to be wanted."

    No, I didn't Rasmus said those lines, am just quoting them after having read your lines and finding a co-relation. :)

    Nice optimism.

    Cheers
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Freedom should be reached within first :)


    And..... your page looks awesome

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  5. And yes..... your words are beautiful..... made me feel positive.... I love it now...after reading it again

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  6. @Ritz...NEVER fear shadows...is well quoted by Ruth Renkel...i hve just adopted it...rest of d expressions r frm my heart...just wrote wat m goin thru rite now

    n yes rightly said..."and manipulation starts it gets easier to handle"

    @Mahesh Kalaal...thnks...dis simple words hve let my heart 2 vent out my emotions

    @Rajat....thank u :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete...d song creates a gr8 impact...thanks

    @Rashmi M....Thank u...it feels nice wen my expressions hve an impact on its readers...along wid venting out my emotions :)

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  7. At the end of every dark tunnel, there's always an exit, a way out of darkness and into light and freedom.

    http://lovers-shore.blogspot.com

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  8. I'll COMBAT,
    I'll STRIVE,
    I'll BLOW AWAY THE DARKNESS,

    & Let the LIGHT of FREEDOM SHINE in MY LIFE.......

    great inspiring lines....

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  9. all of this was so inspiring. I loved it. the photos as well are amazing!!

    xoxox

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  10. @ROFO....ders alwys an exit

    @Saumya, Lauren Elizabeth,Komal Ali.... Thank U :)

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  11. I liked the last para. :)
    Full of optimism. :)

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  12. I've recently come across a lot of youngsters writing heavy stuff... I mean, deep and strong emotions running through their work.. like this one... and it makes me feel a little scared... why has the world turned into such a bad place?!

    Liked the positive ending to your poem.
    Cheers...
    Pallavi

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  13. Light of HOPE,
    SPARK of Faith,
    I'll COMBAT,
    I'll STRIVE

    such beautiful words ..loved your poem :)

    +ve n -ve of the phones and a girl's life
    http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=34845

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  14. Beautifully written! :)I liked the optimism!

    Hope you like my post too!
    When love calls

    Take care! happy blogging :)

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  15. @writerzblock...world hasnt bcum a bad place...just d circumstances r changed a lot...dats why such strong emotions....& Thank u!

    @umapoems....Thank u!

    @Romeo Das...Thank u 4 likin d optimism :)

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  16. Nice, I could feel the suffocation, and more since right now I am going through a tough time related to freedom.

    You are right being a girl if I have to kill, I will,
    but i will not surrender.
    And I hope no woman does.

    That freedom is a right - is a notion,
    That freedom is yours - is idealistic,
    That freedom is what you are living - is choice.

    I sincerely hope you choose it every minute.

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