Tuesday, December 21, 2010

EMANCIPATION...

Yet another dark days,
My mind dreadfully sways...

Cyclonic emotions,
Anguish notions...

How can I make it windless?
All the unbearable stress...

He would never say what I want to hear,
Neither would I, Someone wouldn't bear...
No support for a relation to nurture,
Because of the so-called culture...

Falling short of target,
Achieving it, I hate...
Tired of convincing,
WHY?
I don't need such a thing,
What I want to do is only HEALING...

Thoughts of trepidation,
State of consolidation...

Mind voracious,
Heart vexatious...

Do I desire to runaway?
NO!
Though I'm scared,
I'm tired,
Never will I runaway!

But I want to cry
YES I WANT TO!
Tears, not flowing,
An unrestrained feeling...

IS "I" SOUNDING SELFISH?
NO!
Its me who is hurt,
My emotions being burnt,
Its MY LIFE,
ITS ME,
coz If I die,
everything will cease to matter.

What I wish for?
Neither sympathy,
Nor empathy,
 No consolation,
Its EMANCIPATION...




19 comments on "EMANCIPATION..."
  1. I love the new look of the blog compared to the previous look.

    This poem is another good piece of work from you. You write from the heart..that shows in your words. keep it up.


    Regards
    Always Happy

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  2. Thank you so much for your sweet reply :)
    yes definitely if I cant feel it I wont be able to express it :)

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  3. freedom from the societal shackles!!!

    go for it!!!!!!

    powerfully beautiful!!

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  4. Emancipation, well thats a sweet word. Sacrifice? Not necessarily, hurt? Not that bad.
    Do what you can. Help will arrive, and you'l get what you seek.

    Nice poem. And yes, the template is good.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. It is so true and beautiful...Keep penning your thoughts. Its cathartic!

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  6. @magiceye... That s powerful yet beautiful reply... Thanks :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete... Sweet...never thought of it in that way... Thanks for the positive words :)

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  7. @Alka Gurha...you got that right...catharsis...indeed
    I felt so better after penning down these voluptuous emotions in my mind... Thank you :)

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  8. Your words reflect the strength of your thoughts...keep writing:)

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  9. Its alright to cry. Sometimes the pain is so much that even the tears aren't enough, and its alright to be selfish when you're right. There will be a point when the tears would flow naturally. Let them come.

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  10. pure poetry....the words were hard...and yet so soft that the flow never jarred....

    loved what you did with words...

    :)

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  11. you sounds like a poet ,your poem flows so nicely but I can feel pain in your poem. I just hope you are fine .
    lovely template and bringing life to blog even more.wish you a merry Christmas and a very happy New Year.

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  12. @Dr.Raksha...Thanks a lot :)

    @Meher...probably I am waiting for that moment...Thanks :)

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  13. @Aashi...Thanks for the appreciation :)

    @Dr.Pratibha...I am fine...Thanks...changed the template to a lively one so the readers wont take any negative emotion after reading my a bit gloomy expressions :)
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too :)

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  15. very well penned thoughts.... it did took some time for me to go thru the poem and undrstand word by word, but in the end it was a nice journey...:)
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  16. loved it..
    He would never say what I want to hear,
    Neither would I, Someone wouldn't bear.

    thst soo touching.. someone wouldn't bear.. thats oh.. so true.. its always a confusion before confession.
    take care

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  17. So very true Poonam

    The post is full of emotions..calm yet like a raging storm..

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  18. @Alcina...Thanks a lot dear :)

    @IRFANUDDIN...Thanks will take it as compliment :)

    @Deepika...Yes the confusion...Thanks :)

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  19. Lovely. esp. the last stanza!

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