Thursday, June 9, 2011

Restrained Yet Unfettered...




Whether I keep my eyes,
open or close,
I see nothing,
but
Darkness

Groping in dark,
I fear losing myself...

My only treasure,
Has being stolen...
How could I not protect it?
Why did they leave me?

What is left?
Is
Only the feeling of
Bereft...

Confined in dark,
I am trying to annihilate...

Ferreting out,
Standing on edge of the cliff,
I still cannot see anything,
But
I want to fly...

Words...
My Wings,
Once
I soared,
among other birds
elegantly...

Reverance for words,
Words...taken away from me,
since long...

I need my wings,
or
I shall soar down,
Towards
My End.


P.S. I don't know why,I feel its incomplete...








20 comments on "Restrained Yet Unfettered..."
  1. creatively expressed and well entwined !!!
    loved it.

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  2. Lovely!
    Perhaps the feeling of incompleteness made your verses complete.

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  3. i cannot comment but feel the incompleteness myself, probably not in words though...

    sounds like a deep loss, nicely put forward

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  4. Hey I liked the different words you use to express that u feel incomplete, and the pic is just wonderful... :)

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  5. It is incomplete may be because the soaring words are yet to join and create the magical bridge of hope once again :)..like in the dark night does the firefly :)..wonderful piece!

    I have something for you to take up > Here

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  6. Hey, Hi
    the incompleteness is there. its right in front of you. but, incomplete it is not in words...but the thought....it fails to quench the desire to let out everything thats inside...
    :)

    nice.
    :P


    Regards,
    Eon Heath

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  7. Hey don't feel down, sometimes the words just fail us, and yet, the inability itself speaks a lot.

    Nice read. And who would complete it if you were to term it as incomplete? :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  8. The expression is evident...
    Lovely, as always.

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  9. Inventive Indeed :)
    I wish you soar higher and higher..
    Loved your blog's theme
    Take care!
    Love you :)

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  10. @Jyoti Mishra...Welcome here & Thank you :)

    @Prateek...Probably yes, its still inside...Thank you :)

    @Beyond...yes the feeling of incomplete is still lurking, I did try to pen it down
    Thank you :)

    @manshaa...Hey Thanks a lot :)

    @Alcina...like in the dark night does the firefly...Hmm...Nice

    Thank you for the tag too :)
    Lets see when can I take it...

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  11. @Eon...Deciphered my incompleteness :P

    Thanks a lot :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete...Hey Thanks...am good now :)

    Waiting for someone or something to complete it ;)

    @Alka...Thanks for always being here :)

    @Simran...Love you too dear
    Thanks :)

    @Blossom...Thanks :)

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  12. Sometimes..its the incompleteness that completes you...though there is mist and a sense of loss nothing is lost...it does come back!

    Maybe in a surprise package :)

    Nice read...
    Take Care.

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  13. This post seems have loneliness felt by the writer. Amazing as if i can also feel the pain . Cheers ...

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  14. Very nicely written...it definitely pulls a string in the heart while reading it..!

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  15. lovely lines!!
    Enjoyed reading it..

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  16. hey nicely written..sorry for coming so late :/

    Dont you noe,sometimes incompleteness leads to perfection:)

    Cheer up dear:)

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  17. First reaction ... beautiful... worth the wait... but hey my comment too is incomplete ... I'll come again... I want to say so much more..... a little caught up... and could not pass by without a word too


    Take care dear... love you

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  18. @Fatima...Hmm surprise package...am waiting then...Thanks a lot :)


    @Angel...What more can I wish for if you could feel the emotions after reading...Thanks :)

    @Lilangel...Thanks for the lovely comment :)

    @Sorcerer...am glad...Thanks a lot :)

    @My sweet Little Friend...Please don't say sorry...I always wait for you here...
    Yes, sometimes :)

    @RM...Hey RM...Firstly I need to Thank you too...because of you I could pen down these words...and I am awaiting for your comment

    Thanks dear...Love you too :)

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  19. Words are my destiny and my only solace,
    They give life to me and a poetic face!

    I really understand what you feel here because i guess i feel quite the same! For some people when everything ceases to work..Words matter the most! You conveyed the thought in a really wonderful way!

    Loved it!

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