Tuesday, July 12, 2011

I'll Be Waiting


Bright blue sky turned gray,
Refreshing air came my way
Far across the seas,
It brought me a message
As the grass caressed by the dews,
I saw a pleasant visage

Thunderous clouds,
Will there be
Rendezvous of two worlds?
Breathe on the glass,
I drew half heart
As the sand flows in hourglass,
Waiting for the heart that's apart

The wait, its long
Is it painful?
Yes!
But
Its graceful

Downpour swept away the pain,
Enliven, I remain
Wait now ephemeral,
Clasped emotions, I did let go
Vows till eternal,
Envision a future, like a rainbow

I'll be Waiting for the Heart,
Who will complete My Heart

You must have come to know that am obsessed with music, so here again am sharing this lovely song, expressing An Abide...Right Here Waiting :)
24 comments on "I'll Be Waiting"
  1. Hey, Hi

    hmm, i was kinda smiling reading this....
    :D <-- like this

    nice..the flow in the mid part is beauutiful...end...?? missing...
    :)

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  2. hmm pain yes...but dont know y made me hold a smile all throughout...n end the song..love richard marx super love the song...thanx 4 sharin...:)

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  3. Wow!!!

    I couldn't help singing- Such a feeling's coming over me... There's wonder in almost everything I see..

    The song is 'On top of the world...'

    The poem has got a fresh feel to it and a hint of you too, the silently expressive Doc :P

    Loved it :)

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  4. Waiting for something that you aren't even sure if has come to this part. Hope that is, gooooooooood.
    Not that I have anything different.

    :)
    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. and i love that song too :)

    but y do i always see pain in ur poetry? i mean u appear to be a sweet, lively soul...i guess something just lie deep within or maybe i m over estimating coz i really loved these lines!


    sarah

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  6. I loved these lines. Waiting...

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  7. Great weave again...love the new blog design.

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  8. lovely words, the words are coming alive in my minds

    Take care :)

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  9. Wherever you go,whatever you do ,i'll be here waiting for you....wow beautiful song...love this line i will be waiting for the heart to complete my heart..patience really is a virtue.

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  10. Fantastic...!!

    and I loved the picture of that girl waiting..:)

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  11. It was a sweet poem...and it left a smile on my face, there was this hopefulness even in the wait!

    Now I get how you know where all these advice's come from...and I'm saying in genuinely :)

    btw nice template..but don't you think its a bit dark ?/ Nevertheless i love it!

    Take Care.

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  12. @Eon

    And I am happy and smiling too :)

    end will be missing and kind of lost, coz am still waiting...

    Thank you :D

    P.S.Somethings missing in your comment too first time ever...


    @Vaisakhi

    Keep Smiling :)

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  13. @manshaa

    Thanks a lot, and I love that song too :)

    and you know me better ;)


    @Blasphemous Aesthete

    Hope it is! but am not expecting much too, coz expectations hurt a lot

    Thank you :)

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  14. @Sarah

    Thank you so much :)

    Without pain, I can never say that am living, it holds a place as much as love and happiness does.

    The ocean is much deeper than we can think and there is much more beyond the horizon, the horizon is not an end...in fact its a new beginning of the other side of the world :)

    You are a good observer I must say ;)


    @Prateek

    Thank you :)

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  15. @Alka

    Thanks a lot :)


    @My sweet Little friend

    Good to see you :)

    Thanks!


    @Angel

    Yes indeed patience is a virtue, even though its jittery, its lovely too...as there can be a lovely surprise by the end of it :)

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  16. @Valli

    Thank you...It was kind of i fell in love instantly with the pic too ;)


    @Fatima

    Aww...Thank you so much for saying it :)

    You keep smiling!

    hmm...dark!!! am in love with it and it could get darker anytime ;)


    @magiceye

    Thank you :)


    @Ayushi

    Thank you :)

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  17. I love suggesting songs along with my posts too. Your way of words, amazing! Happy Blogging :)

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  18. May your wait have a bright beginning of another one :)

    Lovely words!
    not to forget superbly woven!

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  19. @Risha Kalra

    Feels incomplete without Music.

    Thanks a lot, Happy blogging :)

    @Alcina

    Thanks for the lovely wish :)

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  20. You don't know how much I loved your blog :) All those lines flow, freely in my mind everywhere :)

    Just wonderful :)

    Cheers,

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  21. There is such BEAUTY in your writing! I just love it and this song has always been a favorite of mine! :)

    Doing a little archive digging ;)

    So many treasures to be found in these places :)

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  22. @Tanvi
    Thank you sweet gal :D


    @Princesa Fiona
    I don't mind you digging. To say, I love to read your thoughts :)

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