Friday, September 16, 2011

The Last Song



Amiable musical breeze,
Tranquil moon behind the clouds,
What a transcendental sight!

Million stars befriending me,
As I am writing this silent symphony,
In magnificent yet so lonely night

Shuffling through pages of past,
Replaying somber tunes,
Tearing one by one,
Burning torn pieces,
Blowing away the ashes

I know,
It can’t reincarnate,
but
It won’t gnaw me within,
It won’t tear me apart,
anymore

How I wish,
Those emotions shouldn’t have born!
Once ecstatic, later repressing,
I killed them,
Living with no serenity,
How I wish,
Those emotions shouldn’t have born!

Mind numbing pain, escalating,
My feelings as autumn leaves,
Shedding from heart,
Crumbling, crushing on path

Drizzling raindrops,
Hurts my dried eyes,
Immersing neither hides the pain,
Nor abates it,
I continue to wander,
Still breathing

Future obscure,
Eagerness died away,
For the wait,
That tomorrow embraces,
and
For vision of what lies Beyond Horizon

Warmth burns me,
Cover me with blanket of cold & peace

I wish for,
Calm sleep than shattered dreams

Tonight,
I close my eyes,
While the horizon is dark,
Rhythm now evanescent,
and
I have ended The Last Song


This beautiful song Wait For Sleep, shared by my Best Buddy Manshaa :)
 "In with the ashes
Or up with the smoke from the fire
With wings up in heaven
Or here, lying in bed
Palm of her hand to my head
Now and forever curled in my heart
And the heart of the world"



Dream Theater - Wait for Sleep .mp3
Found at bee mp3 search engine
37 comments on "The Last Song"
  1. Of all of it, the first two paras were mind blowing. BEAUTIFUL and living like poetry!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  2. i simply loved the whole thing...wouldnt say much...coz i m blown away already...:)
    n well thanku 4 givin me a new song tu hum...:)))))

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  3. Hey, Hi

    like i said, reminded me of someone...
    :)
    i want to write more...but then, words aarent there...
    its beautiful...

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  4. i should have come earlier,but I slept..:(

    even the word beautiful isn't enough to describe this..:)

    but i feel as though you're sad,i hope I'm wrong

    take care poonam :)

    P.S: i always like when you include stars in ur poem,it adds magical touch ..:)

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  5. Your expressions are like desires ..... Peace & Content .... Vanity & Valor ...... poignance & surreal.... brings a smile of content !!!!

    U need to keep writing ... or just keep the conversation with yourself on... u can be inspirations to many .... do not smoke away !!!

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  6. befriending the night sky and moon does bring in many emotions unknown..they sometimes have d power to put us in a peaceful slumber but more often they end up making us even more vulnerable!
    beautiful :)


    sarah

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  7. I never this word anywhere...
    it's magical.

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  8. This is one of your best Doc! This piece of writing is so beautiful... so many confessions.. felt a kind of peace in this poem.. lovely ... visualized every thing u have written... :-))

    And...
    Remember what I said once, though its a good bye, you will be back with the magical touch of Beyond Horizon.. that which beholds till the end :)

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  9. Doc I was so completely into the poem that I did not notice you've mentioned me :-) Now that you've shared it on your blog, the song becomes all the more special!

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  10. It's breathtakingly beautiful :)
    Need I say more..I don't think so coz at times some few words convey a lot...hope I could convey what I felt :)

    TC

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  11. lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  12. I like it.. :) :) In love with your blog :)

    Cheers,

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  13. Loved the last few lines...:) I have ended the last song...beautiful as always :)

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  14. @Rohini
    Thank you...am glad you read this one :)

    @Blasphemous Aestheste
    Hmmm...living like a poetry...Thanks a lot :)

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  15. @Vaisakhi
    hehe...blown away...really?!! Keep humming the song
    Thank you :)

    @Droopy Rose
    Thank you :)

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  16. @Eon Heath
    Having said it reminded you of someone,conveyed how you felt about it :)
    Thank you

    @My sweet little friend
    aww...no worries dear..you had read it

    Thank you :)

    and I need not say much...my words have said it all

    you too take care :)

    I had told you the meaning of my name...moon and stars always befriend each other ;)

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  17. @Urban butterfly
    Thank you :)

    @Alka
    Thank you so much :)

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  18. @Ritz
    I honestly have no words...Thank you so very much...I just cant stop myself from re reading what you said :)

    the conversations have never stopped..they do need some time to come through words here...
    I am not gonna perish or smoke away...will keep my words :)


    @Sarah
    True...they somehow makes us vulnerable but the peace keeps us going or i shall say living
    Thank you :)

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  19. @Beyond
    Thank you :)

    @Manshaa
    You know the story behind this one...gratitude is all I can express
    Thanks a lot :)

    and I will take that as a compliment that you did not notice your name ;)

    P.S.missing you

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  20. @Fatima
    Yes your few words conveyed your emotions...Its a pleasure
    Thank you :)

    @Kalyan
    Thank you :)

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  21. @Tanvi
    Ahh!!! Made me happy happy :D
    Thank you :)

    @Lilangel
    Hey lilangel Thanks a lot :)

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  22. @All my dear friends
    Sorry for the late reply...not being lazy this time ;)

    Its only that replying again will take sometime :)

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  23. Beautiful, poignant..full of regret...Yet the last line hopeful..I have ended The Last Song..no more returning to the pain that made you sleepless...kudos for your excellent work!

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  24. Owwwww I wonder....if pain isn't a handsome carelessly talented painter with piercing eyes and strands of hair accentuating the intoxicating eyes, heartlessly dipping his brush in our hearts to find the colours with which to paint the most beautiful sketches in the skies of our hearts' eyes. Tempting us with the beauty of the sketches and the magnetism of his dark quietness to let him stay, let him keep painting from the colours of our heart.


    A very beautiful sketch made of words dear
    God bless you
    Love

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  25. Shuffling through pages of past,
    Replaying somber tunes,
    Tearing one by one,
    Burning torn pieces,
    Blowing away the ashes

    wow............

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  26. Such a beautiful blog you have here and this poem is fantastic! I am enjoying the song posted here as I write this ~ I love it and it's a first for my ears :)

    Thank you so much for visiting my blog today! I always feel blessed to acquire a new reader and when it is one as lovely as you, my ♥ truly *beams* beyond the horizon :) :)

    I look forward to some new posts from you soon and I'll also be back to peruse the archives of goodies that I've missed :)

    Have a *beautiful* weekend!
    Fiona

    P.S. ~ "I would love to read your IMPRESSIONS...about my simple EXPRESSIONS :)" ~ SO original! Love it :)

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  27. wow... beautifully expressed :)

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  28. It is just beautiful!
    My first time visit here and I love it.

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  29. This was a good read. Beautiful string of words. I hope u write more often. :)

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  30. Finally :) .. loved it , the depth of pain that someone has gone through couldnt have been summed up more beautifully ...

    it wont gnaw me within (i can so relate to that)

    how i wish those emotions werent born .. aaahh .. how we often wish .. love the way the feeling of regret has been painted in that para ..

    drizzling raindrops, hurts my dried eyes (epic), beautifull..
    i think i can go on and on :P.. beautifuly penned, i simply loved the ease at which every para has bloomed to the other .. its inspiring.. like dee mentioned - please keep writing more :)...

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  31. @Susie
    Thanks a lot for the appreciation when it comes from a poet like you.

    But I haven't expressed any regret.I am scared of that word. I believe Live is to live along with the pain, so no regrets yet :)

    @RM
    Overwhelmed, I am!!! Each time your comments sketches a beautiful painting.
    Thank you so very much :D

    @Pandian
    Thank You :)

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  32. @Fiona
    Humbled. You shall always hear a new tune over here ;)
    Yup, I will come soon. Thanks again

    and aaa...I know am replying very late...weekend is again, Enjoy it. :)

    @SUB
    Thank you :)

    @Spiderdama
    Thank you...hope you shall visit again. :)

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  33. @:-Dee
    WOW!! there's a smiley in your name.
    Thank you :)

    @Tinu
    I am happy happy to read your thoughts and perception..and you know its right ;)

    Thanks for saying its inspiring :)

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