Thursday, January 5, 2012

Reminiscence


Scar
Remembrance
Of broken promise

Promise?
No! It wasn’t
It was keeping a word

Word 
She believed
Blind faith?
Or her selfishness?

Remember ‘No one else?’
She did hide
But never lied

Breeze across the seven seas
Slashed her within
Hour glass shattered
Grains of sand
Spilled around
Their voices
Deafening
It’s End of
Months long wait

Walked away
As if never came her way

Mending her heart?
She did not give
wasn’t fallen for
But she was on the verge of

Half drawn heart
On her breathe
Stay Incomplete

She is no longer waiting
She will not!
I won’t let her to!

Scar
She won’t hide
Reminiscence Screaming of
Don’t Trust Easily!


P.S. This time I haven't attached any song. Why not you suggest one..Let me know your favorite :)



10 comments on "Reminiscence"
  1. trust is a rare phenomenon now.. well written, reflects the inner pain

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  2. touching and soulful!
    so much said in too few a lines..nicely written
    Following you straightway.

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  3. And hmm....privileged to your 100th follower.Congrats and keep sharing.looking to read more from you.

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  4. "Scar
    She won’t hide
    Reminiscence of
    Don’t Trust Easily!"

    Excellent way to end this great writing! It brings home the message of us needing something to remind us of how we were hurt . . . without this, history may keep repeating itself.

    I feel cheated ~ no song :P :D

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  5. @Beyond
    No Doubt about it. Can't let self burn often.

    Thanks :)

    @Rohit
    Thank you :)

    @Fiona
    Ah! Why no song :( :P
    Thank you :)

    @Swati
    Thank you :)

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  6. I suggest you the song Someday you will be loved by Death cab for cutie :) :)

    Cheers,

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  7. @Tanvi
    Thank you once again for the song :D

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