Thursday, May 5, 2011

I Feel Close To YOU Tonight...

"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"-Maya Angelou

As the quote says, I am here to continue with the third part of the love series. You can read the first part CHANGE?!  and the second  If Only YOU Knew...

Simplicity and calmness was her jewel.But she was also the one who never gave up easily.When he came in her life, she saw the world through his eyes and thereon the world looked beautiful.

Its been months since their last meet. Somehow the distance have made her to love him more.

Seed of love had been sown, and it is like a tree now, growing each day elegantly with its strong roots.

That night she had cried, only cried.But not tonight! How can his love ever make her cry?

 Breeze sings,
And the Leaves dances on its tunes,
As it passes by me,
I can feel the touch of your love...

Walking on flower-bed,
Stretching my arms,
Breathing in the air,
Bringing the essence of your love...

Your love,
as sweet as,
Smell of first rains,
Walking in it,
Drenching in your love,

                                                             I close my eyes,
I see you,
My fingers longing to touch your face,
I won't,
Fearing I may loose you...

Dawn shines with Hope,
We will meet soon!

Under this soothing starry sky,
I Feel Close To YOU Tonight!
I know you do too,
The Star brightens,
As I say,
I Love You!

He too was an adamant guy, anger always on his nose. The time when the girl came in his world, everything changed. He adored her simplicity.Loosing an argument with her made him more than happy, because her smile was his life now.

Life happened to me,
When I met you!

Your Smile,
reaches your eyes,
Your Eyes,
Speaks for your heart,
Your Heart,
Beautiful, Loving, Caring...

You are a rose with thorns,
Thorns, so
No one will dare to crush you,
I am not scared of the pain,
Staying away from you,
My heart cries with pain...

My love,
Like the Beautiful Horizon!
Sky kisses the earth..

Our fingers have never entwined,
Our Soul is,
With Love!

Please take care of yourself,
My Life without you in it,
is not a Life at all!

I knew,
I would be away from You,
I am missing you,
more than I thought!

I Love You,
I know, You do too,
The Star Brightens,
As Your Smile,
I Feel Close To YOU Tonight!

They both wanted to hear those three words by each other, because sometimes saying is all that is yearned.

Love does not have an ending, if it has, then How can it be love?
*Its a path that starts from Forever and ends at Never...

But the elegant tree even with its strong roots can be uprooted by fierce of the nature or by the senseless power of human anytime! The Story continues...

The song says about the emotions of both hearts. Far Yet So Near...

My words may fail to touch your heart, the song won't! I am not gonna say how tender it is, experience it yourself, relive the lovely memories with your love...and Do Let Me Know about your feelings... :)



  1. Oh! Poonam dear...what should I say?? You've taken my breath away with this post of yours..this one is the best till date in this series !

    You wont believe I've these tears lined up in my eyes just threatening to fall..but I wont let doesn't mean crying does it?

    And the song..its wonderful, I love this song time and again I end up listening to of my fav in my playlist.

    The pain to miss someone and not seeing them for long does make the heart weep but the knowledge that that someone also longs to meet you quells the turbulence and there is an eternal glow !

    Love of this kind is rare to find at such a time...hardly anyone understands your love..after all they are nothing but surrounded by love..true love ? that I dunno :)

    Nice one...Te amo for this one :)

    Take Care.

  2. Hey, Hi

    and am happy with the way it progresses...
    nice...the thoughts aare beautiful...the way you have built it, or framed it...
    the composition is excellent...

    The Silhouette...

  3. they met, not once
    but once was enough,
    to make her fall
    to make her sigh..
    Love is forever.. Yes it is.

    Nice to see the girl in love behind the doc :)

  4. Beautiful elucidation on never ends.For sure.

  5. This is beautiful but I am still skeptical about the concept of Love. To me it always seems to be on papers and fairy tales. :P

  6. =)

    There is always something in closed books that has a natural magnetism to it... so are personalities. Th guy, the girl, the anger, the loving and longing of losing an argument to her, its all beautiful.
    May the love grow stronger and may no forces lay harm upon that tree.

    Blasphemous Aesthete

  7. I just have a prayer... may this heart be protected with all it's softness and delicateness... may you feel like feeling this or things brighter, lighter and higher than this.... may you get what you are giving and more... may the feelings be given their due place and reciprocated in a manner that befits you and matches your graciousness. May this loveliness never have to meet ugliness...God bless you my dear... if at all you get to see the gray shades of love may they get only brighter.....

    Take care... :) :)

  8. Beautiful.....I feel like I entered another world..hehe...:D
    Happy Blogging..:D

  9. You are gripping me day by day with your awesomely weaved story..And i will wait for the next part..and the moon and the star(they always throw me into dreaming)
    The poems are just spell bounding..And loved the lines written in red very much..

    Stupendous..please proceed further :)

  10. Poonam, the series is getting better and better. It sure did touch my heart. Well done.

  11. Every words are just beautiful
    I have to agree with fatima (she said it well)

    Life happened to me,when i met you...
    Dear,you are really talented :)

    Blood Is Red

  12. Love the way you are unwinding it... a deep insight in the concept of love ... every word touches your heart and it makes you keep reading .... anxiety youfeel as you live the words as one the characters.... Lovely ...


  13. nice reading... seems so realistic. And I bet it is.

  14. loved both the poems, way u described the soul and horizon was emphatic,dese r tuff thngs to say bt yeaah later on form the most memorabl meoments of life...finally,nice poem will be an understatement to commnt, jus loved reading it

  15. Writer seems you are telling unspoken things inside of me...indeed ,women are women !

  16. @Fatima....Oh dear, now what should I say for your lovely comment!

    I feel sometimes let the tears flow as long it is for love :)

    Missing someone is painful yet an eternal feeling, and knowing we are being missed too...It's Bliss!

    True love is rare, but its the only thing that gives a true meaning to life...

    Thanks a lot...Lots of love to you too :)

    I am sorry for the really late reply this time...

    @Eon...Thank you so composition you mean the song, then yes...Its really beautiful...No matter how many time I listen...It always renews the wonderful feeling :)

    @Deepika...Thanks for those lovely lines :) love...ahem ahem ;)

    @Alka...It has a start and never ends...Thanks :)

    @Prateek...Hehehe...probably I am as skeptical as you are :P

    But I feel, love is inside, around us, that's how we can put it on paper..and about fairy tales...after all it is a tale that's been created by us after all...Thanks :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete...Yes every thing about it is beautiful...I wish the them too...Thank you :)

  17. @RM..every time you leave a leaves me speechless :)
    I have nothing to say than Thanks...I am blessed to have you in my life...Love...Take care :)

    @Valli...AHHH! Am honored...Thanks :)

    @Alcina...Hmm...the night sky, moon, stars...Its beautiful feeling
    Thank you so much..I will continue it for sure :)

    @Always Happy...Feels happy happy to know it...Thanks a lot :)

    @Geeta Singh..Thank You :)

    @Sweet Little Friend...Thank you so much :)

    Well, I don't know whether talented or not..I do feel those emotions when I write them...

    and telling about these two lines "Life happened to me,when I met you"...I don't know how I wrote it...Honestly I myself am in doubt whether I read it somewhere or its penned by me...But its for sure...When I thought what would be the guys feelings, I knew...It would be only expressed by these words :)

    @Ritz...Thanks for the lovely appreciation...means a lot when someone can feel and live the words :)

    @Beyond...Yes, It is!
    A story of many hearts around :)
    Thank You :)

    @Vineet...Yes! the memorable moments they are
    Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment :)

    @Angel...Hey! Thanks a lot...they are indeed the unspoken for many among us :)

  18. beautiful !!
    Intelligently crafted.

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