Saturday, September 22, 2018

I Don't Want My Love



I don't want my love to break you,
I don't want my love to hurt you,
I don't want my love to flow in your words,
I don't want my love to be your pain,
I don't want my love to be in your shadow,
For you to be a reminder of me

I want my love to give you strength,
To live away from me,
To never give up on love and life,
For if you do give up,
I will lose the one who was never meant for me,
I will lose who wasn't made for me

©Beyond Horizon

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45 comments on "I Don't Want My Love"
  1. The poem is so powerful and filled with emotion! Love is simple, but it is we who make it complicated!

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    1. Our expectations make it complicated. Thank you Keerthi.

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  2. As simple as love sounds, there are also a few complications it carries. The power is in finding the true value of it. Good one.

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  3. Beautiful expressions via these lines! How better love could be described. Simply loved it!

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    1. Its too difficult, but that's how it should be. Thank you Mahathi.

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  5. Great poem. One can't describe breaking up in a better way. You have put your heart in it and it touches readers heart straight away.

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    1. No, No, it isn't about breaking up at all Paresh. It is about two souls of despite loving each other cannot be together. Thank you.

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  6. love is beautiful and you have defined it in so many words. nicely written

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  7. Very well penned. Love is not just about getting but also about giving and being selfless.

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  8. Love can give all the strength of the world

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  9. So well penned. You bought out the self less emotions that one goes through when in love.

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  10. Love is pure and is beautiful. Lovely lines yu have written here.

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  11. Such true love is hard to find especially in today's materialistic and selfish world, I wonder how many would love unconditionally

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  12. Your writing is so beautiful and yet powerful at the same time. Loved the description of "love".

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  13. How beautiful and powerful this poetry is!

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  14. Love is always pure and true, just loved the way you written about the true meaning of love

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  15. Loved the words here!
    "I want my love to give you strength"...true love, indeed!

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  16. Beautiful poem
    I love this concept of photo ptompt

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    1. and yes, you should visit the site. There are some amazing illustrations to get inspiration from.

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  17. So So Beautiful the poem is. Loved It. Love is one pure emotion, it transform souls. Superb!!

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  18. Amazing lines..decribed love so wonderfully. #Surbhireads

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  19. Gem of a poem and narrating pain, longing and love in an intense manner.

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    1. Thats a huge appreciation coming from you, Vishal. Thank you again.

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  20. beautiful expression.
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  21. a sweet simple love letter. Nice interpretation of the photo prompt
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